Schule & Referate
terrible english(184x gelesen)
also wir haben vor kurzem "The Giver" in Englisch lesen müssen.War jetzt kurze Zeit krank und erfahre heute das ich nen Ende für das Buch schreieben muss. Das habe ich auch getan aber mein Englisch is echt absolut grottig und es wäre toll wenn ihr mal drüber schaun könntet und meinen Text berichtigen könntet.
Hier der Text:
Some moments later Jonas recognized that the music wasn’t an illosion. Far away in the front of him he saw brightens lights and the place from where the music came. He began, suddenly, to feel happe but also forceless.The lights became bigger but he felt that his last energy leave him. With his last force he trys to hold Gabe in his arms but than he got unconscious.
When he waked up he found himself in a nice and warm room.In the front of the room was Gabriel playing with a woman in withe clothers. The woman saw that he waked up and welcomed him. She told him that the hunters found him and Gabriel on a slet infront of the city. Jonas looked outside the window and he recognized that this must be elsewhere. In the next days he became healthy and very much people from the tv and from the press came to him an asked him about the community and the escape.
Jonas has reached his goal he saved Gabriels live ana escaped from the community to live in elsewhere.
Danke und liebe Grüße
Who can speak English :)?
Wer kann gut English