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Beitrag von p4tr1ckp4...

28.11.2007 20:54:40

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ich hab eine zusammenfassug geschrieben...wärd ihr vllt so nett einen blick drauf zu werfen??? ich danke euch! ich stehe in english z.Z. ziemlich schlecht, deswegen dass...^^ bitte hilft mir...

The book tells about a 13 years old German boy named Frank. He has many problems in english. So his parents decided to send Frank in the Easter holidays to his aunt Trudy in America. They hope that he would speak more english after that holidays.

He had to fly to New York City, alone. At the Kennedy Airport, where Frank arrived, he confused the bus. He got in a black, big van. Inside the van were furs and diamonds. Frank suspects that the van is from criminals. And his impression was right. So he attempted to escape! But the door closed and the van starts with Frank inside.

After the door has opened, he sees three men. Frank runs away. But the three men, Pancho, Smitty and Fats run rearward him. But they catched Frank.
Together they drove to a plane, which should take the three men anywhere. Later they kick Frank out, and show him a road, which he must follow to got in civilization back. At the booting out, Frank took a pouch, where was Frank´s passport and diamonds from the gangsters. So the gangsters must searching Frank once again.
After two days Frank runs away to a café shop, because he was hungry and thirsty.
And there Frank got in a truck to conceal himself. Inside the truck he learns to know a girl named Linda. She leaves her home, because her parents want to divorce. She wouldn´t that.
So they leave together the place in the truck. When the truck stoped, they got out of the it. Linda and Frank currently walked at a ghost town. There they get to know Martha. She helps Linda and Frank conceal from the three men. The next morning Martha, Frank and Linda go to the train station. They take a boxcar without Martha to Winslow. In Winslow Smitty, Pancho and Fats catch Frank. Linda sees this and she goes to the police.
The police found Frank by the help of Linda, and at once they arrested the three men.
At the end Frank meet aunt Trudy and his parents. Linda comes back to his parents.
Frank had as much english learn, that he could tell his happened things in detail, in english of course!

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Beitrag von p4tr1ckp4...

28.11.2007 21:02:52

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jmd...da??? pls help....es geht mir hauptsächlich um die zeiten...denn grammatikalisch ist alles richtig

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Beitrag von rainbow_tear

28.11.2007 21:09:42

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The book /Autor??) tells about a 13 years old German boy named Frank.
He has many problems in English. So his parents decide to send Frank to his aunt Trudy living in America in the Easter holidays.
They hope that he can improve his English in the holidays. He has to fly to New York City, alone. At the Kennedy Airport, where Frank arrived, he confuses (wenn du "verpasst" meinst-> he misses)
the bus. He got in a black, big van. Inside the van are furs and diamonds. Frank suspects that the van is owned by criminals. And his impression is right. So he attempts to escape! But the door is closed and the van starts with Frank inside. After the door is opened, he sees three men. Frank runs away. But the three men, Pancho, Smitty and Fats run rearward him. They catched Frank. Together they drive to an airport and take a plane, which shall take the three men (and Frank??) anywhere. Later they kick Frank out and show him a road, which he must follow to get back in civilization.
At the booting out, Frank takes a pouch, where Frank´s passport and diamonds from the gangsters were. So the gangsters have to search for Frank once again. Two days later Frank runs away to a café shop because he is hungry and thirsty. There Frank gets into a truck to conceal himself. Inside the truck he learns to know a girl named Linda. She left home because her parents want to divorce. She wouldn´t bare that. So they leave together the place in the truck. When it stoped, they get out of the truck. Linda and Frank currently walk to a ghost town. There they get to know Martha. She helps Linda and Frank conceal from the three men. The next morning Martha, Frank and Linda go to the train station. They take a boxcar without Martha to Winslow. In Winslow Smitty, Pancho and Fats catch Frank. Linda sees that and goes to the police. The police finds Frank with the help of Linda and they arrest the three men. At the end Frank meets aunt Trudy and his parents. Linda comes back to her parents. Frank has improved his English so well, that he could tell his story in detail, in English of course!


Lies dir das nochmal durch, bei einigen stellen war ich nicht ganz sicher.
das gröbste müsste raus sein.

warum springst du zwischen den zeitformen rum?

*lehrerinblick aufsetz* ^^

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Beitrag von p4tr1ckp4...

28.11.2007 21:11:33

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ich wollte es ja alles im past machen....kannst du vllt nich nochmal durchguckn??? pls

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Beitrag von rainbow_tear

28.11.2007 21:12:53

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summaries (zusammenfassungen) werden nicht im past geschrieben!!!!
da bekommst du für jede past-form nen halben fehler angestrichen.
ich kanns aber gern nochmal ändern wenn du willst.... is ja nicht meine note.

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Beitrag von p4tr1ckp4...

28.11.2007 21:23:00

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nene, dann lass mal... danke dir

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Beitrag von p4tr1ckp4...

28.11.2007 21:29:58

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A Disaster Was Disabled
An engine broke down in the south Sudan in a settelment. They haven´t any water since two days. The rain, which falls, makes the dessert to a big mud pool. But as the rain stoped, Roger, a Britain mechanic come with his group and repairs the engine. By the deficiency of water, the Sudanese people ain´t drink that improve rain water. Mercifully nothing badly happened.

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Beitrag von DieMarti

28.11.2007 21:32:48

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Frank suspects that the van is owned by criminals. And his impression is right. hier würd ich glaub ich auch eher suspection nehmen.. impression passt glaub ich in dem kontext nicht soo gut..

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Beitrag von rainbow_tear

28.11.2007 21:36:52

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A Disaster Was Disabled (<- behindert????)

An engine broke down in the south Sudan in a settelment. They haven't have any water for two days. The rain, which falls, transforms the dessert into a big mud pool. But when the rain has stopped, Roger, a Britain mechanic, will come with his team and repair the engine. By the deficiency of water, the Sudanese people ain´t drink that improve rain water. Mercifully nothing badly happened.

irgendwie so... ka... mein wellensittich nervt -.-

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Beitrag von p4tr1ckp4...

28.11.2007 21:43:06

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noch vllt einer der sich mal versuchen will^^!!!

A Disaster Was Disabled
An engine broke down in the south Sudan in a settelment. They haven´t any water since two days. The rain, which falls, transforms the dessert to a big mud pool. But when the rain stopped, Roger, a Britain mechanic, come with his group and repair the engine. By the deficiency of water, the Sudanese people ain´t drink that improve rain water. Mercifully nothing badly happened.


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Beitrag von DieMarti

28.11.2007 21:46:54

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Inside the truck he learns to know a girl named Linda. She left home, because her parents want to divorce. She is against it.
So they leave the place together with the truck. When the truck stops, they get out of it. Linda and Frank walk immediately to a ghost town. There they get to know Martha. She helps Linda and Frank to conceal from the three men. The next morning Martha, Frank and Linda go to the train station. They take a boxcar without Martha to Winslow. In Winslow Smitty, Pancho and Fats catch Frank. Linda sees this and she goes to the police.
The police find Frank with Linda's help and arrests the three men directly/immediately.
In the end, Frank meets aunt Trudy and his parents. Linda returns to her parents.
Frank learned english that much, that he is now able to tell them about the occurrings in detail.

für ne zusammenfassung aber eigentlich viel zu lang?!

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