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Beitrag von tipico

01.04.2006 23:32:34

tipico

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Themenstarter
tipico hat das Thema eröffnet...

ist der text gut?
was ist daran falsch ?
was kann man verbessern ?
brauche hilfe, weil ich die arbeit gut schreiben ,sonst droht die 5

Introduction: I recently watched a documentary on the television; the documentary was about the number of unemployed workers increasing, and the people who are in work are having to work long hours for little wages, resulting in people having little money to spend. Main part: Many people are striving for work however often finds being out qualified by better people for the job or being replaced by machines. Modern technology can produce goods faster and in much more quantity than humans. In addition if machines are not used, employers require work to be done by a deadline. If these deadlines are not met many of the working people often find themselves sacked. Or are forced to work longer hours to make up the lost time. This often puts much stress into the workers, as well as having less time for itself or for the own family. But in the today's time companies or bosses often do not pay attention to the work time of the employee. This often leads to workers hatred towards its bosses. CONCLUSION In the long run I am in the opinion that the policy must change. One may not use the employee like a machine that can work for twenty four hours, humans need rest for recovery, and maybe a vacation once in a while to be able to relax and be stress free. However bosses and companies only have one goal which is to make high profits, by sending workers on vacation bosses and companies lose a lot of money, which is unacceptable.

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Beitrag von Phil_85

01.04.2006 23:36:16

Phil_85

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eu eu eu dir droht ja echt die 5...nochmal in ruhe durchlesen..

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Beitrag von Phil_85

01.04.2006 23:41:21

Phil_85

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Introduction:
I recently watched a documentary on the television; the documentary was about the number of unemployed workers increasing, and the people who are in work are having to work long hours for little wages, resulting in people having little money to spend.

Es is schon spät, für fehler meinerseits bitte nichv eratwortlich machen:

I recently watched a documentary on # television; this documentary was on the one hand about the increasing number of unemployed workers and on the other, that people with a job, have to work many hours for less money. The result is, that people have not much money to spend.

gute nacht, hoffe das is wenigstens richtig

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Beitrag von anglist

02.04.2006 00:29:26

anglist

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Mein Guter, dürftig, dürftig!! Vielleicht noch einmal konzentriert eine Stunde investieren?
So könnte es grammatisch zumindest keine 5 werden:

Introduction:
I recently watched a documentary on television; the documentary was about the increasing number of unemployed people and even the workers who’ve got a job, have to work long hours for small wages and as a result, they have less money to spend and can hardly avoid the poverty trap.
Main part:
Many unemployed people are striving for work. However, they often find themselves in a position, where they are less qualified for the job than other people. Alternatively, they are simply replaced by machines as modern technology often produces a higher quantity of goods faster than a human worker would be able to. In addition, even if machines are not used, companies require the work to be finished by a deadline for a customer. If these deadlines are not met, many of the working people can often find themselves out of job suddenly. The general economic climate is also often used a reason to close down factories in order to avoid bankruptcy. Another solution to this dilemma is that employees are forced to work longer hours to make up for time lost. This often puts a lot of stress on workers and they also have less time for themselves as well as for their families. But nowadays companies or bosses often do not pay attention to the working hours of their employees. This can even lead to workers feeling hatred towards their bosses and a bad work record.
CONCLUSION
In the long run I am of the opinion that this attitude and behaviour must change. You cannot use an employee like a machine that works twenty four hours a day, human beings need rest for recovery, and maybe a vacation once in a while to be able to relax and relieve stress. However, bosses and companies have only one main goal: to make big profits. Sending workers on vacation results in bosses and companies losing a lot of money, which is unacceptable

trotzdem lg

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Beitrag von tusc

02.04.2006 00:49:12

tusc

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Hi,
hab zumindest einen Teil etwas korrigiert!
Hoffe das hilft ein wenig. Ich wohne uebrigens seit 6 Jahren in Irland!
Gruesse
Torsten

Introduction: I recently watched a documentary on television. The documentary was about the increasing number of unemployed workers, and about the fact that people who are employed have to work longer hours for the same little or even less wages...

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Beitrag von 1810

02.04.2006 01:29:31

1810

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Introduction: I recently watched a documentary on television. The topic, the increasing poverty, was presented by pointing out the growth of unemployment figures and showing the low payment standards for a large group of workers.

Main part: A worker, being just averagely skilled, has difficulty to compete with other, better quallified workers or even machienes. Modern technology is able to produce goods faster and in much higher quantity than traditional human workforce. Additionally, regarding jobs in which machines are not used, employers require work to be done by a deadline.
If these deadlines are not met many of the workers often find themselves sacked. Or they are forced to work extra hours to make up the lost time. This often puts much stress onto the workers, as well as having less time for themselves or for their own family.
But in the mordern time, companies or, more preciesely, the bosses, often do not pay attention to the work time of an employee. This often causes anger to arouse withing workers.

CONCLUSION In the long run I am in the opinion that something must be changed. One may not use the employee like a machine that can work for twenty four hours, humans need rest to recover, and maybe a vacation once in a while to be able to relax and live stress free. However bosses and companies only have one goal: makeing high profits. By sending workers on vacation, bosses and companies lose a lot of money, which in their oppinion is unacceptable.

kann sein dass ich bei einigen sätzen übers ziel hinaus geschossen bin.
aber mal was anderes... wenn das zu einer frage geschrieben wurde wie z.b. "industrialism is good- diskuss" dann is das doch recht wenig... Gewerkschaften (unions) werden ähnlich konsequent verschwiegen wie spezifikationen zum besprochenen land (hier wohl dann doch amerika) du beginnst zwar in deiner einleitung mit dem Problem der sich ausbreitenden Armut, aber letzlich hat das überhaupt nichts mit dem von dir besprochenen Thema zu tun. schreib dir mal auf, was du in nem deutschaufsatz über das thema schreiben würdest und übersetz die punkte dann.

bilde kurze sätze wenn du unsicher bist, und lies dir vor allem nochmal dein Ende durch- du sagst zuerst dass die bosse sich nicht um das wohl der Arbeiter scheren und dann bläst du mit dem Endsatz "vacations are unacceptable" ins gleiche horn...

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