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Beitrag von hallomaus

20.10.2005 21:15:25

hallomaus

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Hi ihr !Wer von euch ist ein Englisch genie und wäre bereit meinen selbstgeschriebenen sprachlich schlechten und falschen Text zu korrigieren1
Ixch saß da nämlich Stunden dran und bekomm dann wieda nur ne 6,weil er sprachlich schlecht ist....

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Beitrag von alva.

20.10.2005 21:16:42

alva.

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schreib ihn doch einfach mal hier rein!! oder schick ihn mir....mal schauen....bin jetzt auch kein genie....aber och keene null!

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Beitrag von stefanie88

20.10.2005 21:19:26

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ja, schreib den doch mal rein, oder mir kannst den auch schicken, ich schaus mir dann mal an.. weiß aber nicht, ob ich dir groß weiterhelfen kann

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Beitrag von Teenie_89x

20.10.2005 21:23:53

Teenie_89x

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schick ihn mir, habe immer ne 2 Englisch gehabt

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Beitrag von hallomaus

20.10.2005 21:24:20

hallomaus

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das wär lieb:
Ralph is a twelve years old boy. (p.10)He is a athletic,good-looking,robust boy.(p.12:he can swim,p.22 attractive appereace,big size).
On the basis of his appereance Ralph is a born leader, which is recognized by the others at once, because he is voted to chief. (p.23)
However Ralph uses his position to detech his group members. (p.30)This behaviour can be a result of his education and the pride of his father, a navy commander. (p.13)
In the beginning is Ralph’s behaviour against Piggy common and offensive, because Ralph ridicules Piggy for all participants of the meeting. (p.25).In the middle of the book recognizes Ralph that Piggy is very intelligent and they become friends.

Piggy
Piggy is a very fat and unauthentic boy (p 7. and p 13; he can’t swim)
Furthermore, he suffers from asthma and has to wear “thick” spectacles. (P9 and p7).As he is an orphan, he “used to live with (his) auntie” (p.13).He is very proud of his auntie, because she is often mentioned. Piggy is a born outsider and the others treat him very hard. For example, when Piggy wants to say something, nobody listen to him, even when Piggy has asthma –attack nobody cares. (p.102).Ralph has a big guilt on Piggy outside role because in the beginning Ralph tells the others, that Peggy’s real name is Piggy and so becomes Piggy an outsider, also he learns the names of the other and integrate them. (p.21)
Piggy is very intelligent, because in the beginning it is his idea to look for other survivors and to have a meeting. (p.14)

The comparison between Piggy and Ralph
Piggy and Ralph are completly different. Ralph is the good-looking leader and Piggy the fat outsider.
Piggy lives by his aunt because he is an orphan. Ralph lives by his parent and is very proud of them.
Ralph seems to be a boy from the upper class with a good education and regular parents home.
On the other hand Piggy seems to be a boy from the lower class, because he makes many grammatical mistakes (we was attacked, p.8)

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Beitrag von Teenie_89x

20.10.2005 21:25:03

Teenie_89x

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bis wann brauchst du diesen Text?

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Beitrag von hallomaus

20.10.2005 21:27:26

hallomaus

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morgen

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Beitrag von juleeee

20.10.2005 21:28:33

juleeee

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ich korrigier den eben, habe einen agenblick gedluld

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Beitrag von hallomaus

20.10.2005 21:29:36

hallomaus

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danke juleeeeeee

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Beitrag von juleeee

20.10.2005 21:34:40

juleeee

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Ralph is a twelve year old boy. (p.10)He is an athletic, good-looking, robust boy.(p.12:he can swim,p.22 attractive appearence, big size).
On the basis of his appearance Ralph is a born leader, which can be seen by the others at once, because he is voted to chief. (p.23)
However, Ralph uses his position to detech his group members. (p.30)This behaviour can be a result of his education and the pride of his father, a navy commander. (p.13)
In the beginning is Ralph’s behaviour against Piggy common and offensive, because Ralph ridicules Piggy for all participants of the meeting. (p.25).In the middle of the book Ralph recognises that Piggy is very intelligent and they become friends.

Piggy
Piggy is a very fat and unauthentic boy (p 7. and p 13; he can’t swim)
Furthermore, he suffers from asthma and has to wear “thick” spectacles. (P9 and p7).As he is an orphan, he “used to live with (his) auntie” (p.13).He is very proud of his aunt, because she often is mentioned. Piggy is a born outsider and the others treat him very hard. For example, when Piggy wants to say something, nobody listens to him, even when Piggy has an asthma –attack nobody cares. (p.102).Ralph has a big guilt on Piggy´s outside role because in the beginning Ralph tells the others, that Peggy’s real name is Piggy and so Piggy becomes an outsider, also he learns the names of the other and integrate them. (p.21)
Piggy is very intelligent, because in the beginning it is his idea to look for other survivors and to have a meeting. (p.14)

The comparison between Piggy and Ralph
Piggy and Ralph are completly different. Ralph is the good-looking leader and Piggy the fat outsider.
Piggy lives with his aunt because he is an orphan. Ralph lives with his parents and he is very proud of them.
Ralph seems to be a boy from the upper class with a good education.
Butpi seems to be a boy from the lower class, because he makes many grammatical mistakes (we was attacked, p.8)

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Beitrag von Annachris89

20.10.2005 21:34:42

Annachris89

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He is aN athletic,good-looking,robust boy.

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