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Beitrag von kleine-liebe

19.11.2006 17:22:26

kleine-liebe

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Themenstarter
kleine-liebe hat das Thema eröffnet...

Hey,
kann mir jemand helfen?
ich hab so ein bild beschreiben müssen, aber mein text hört sich ganz schlecht an....
kann das jemand schöner schreiben? ohne fehler evtl??
wäre voll lieb



On this page we can see a picture with the headline "young people today". When you compare the headline and the picture you first must think about the situation because the picture shows a very old man. The man looks really old, maybe 90years old, or even older. I think he doesn't look like he is happy, I think he makes a sad impression. He isn't beautiful but he looks sympatic. The man has brown eyes and his hairs are grey and white.
On his face he has a lot of folds, his brows are very long and his nose is big.
On the wohle picture we can only see the head of this man. But we can see that he wears a white shirt and over the shirt he wears a black jacket.
When I think about the circumstances surrounding the taking of the photo I could imagine that a young person made this photo because the headline means something about young people. Maybe the young person wanted to know how the old man lives and how his childhood was.
An other idea is that the picture was made while the man was lonely. He looks so sad and he is the only person on the picture. Maybe he has no family or his wife dies. That could be the reason why he wears black clothes.

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Beitrag von BlackSilver

19.11.2006 17:27:38

BlackSilver

BlackSilver hat kein Profilbild...

On this page we can see a picture with the headline "young people today". When you compare the headline and the picture you first have to() think about the situation because the picture shows a very old man. The man looks really old, maybe 90years old, or even older. I think he doesn't look like he is happy, I think he makes a sad impression. He isn't beautiful but he looks sympatic. The man has brown eyes and his hair is () grey and white.
On his face there are ()a lot of folds, his brows are very long and his nose is big.
On the whole() picture we can only see the head of this man (ganzer satz strange). But we can see that he wears a white shirt and over the shirt he wears a black jacket.
When I think about the circumstances surrounding the taking of the photo (das geht so glaub ich nich, aber weiß nich, wie dann..) I could imagine that a young person made this photo because the headline tells?() something about young people. Maybe the young person wanted to know how the old man lives and how his childhood was.
An other idea is that the picture was made while the man was lonely. He looks so sad and he is the only person on the picture. Maybe he has no family or his wife dies. That could be the reason why he wears black clothes.



hmm ja da gibts manche sätze die müsste man komplett umschreiben, ...

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Beitrag von kleine-liebe

19.11.2006 17:32:16

kleine-liebe

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Themenstarter
kleine-liebe hat das Thema eröffnet...

ich hasse englisch, ich krieg einfach nichts gescheites zu stande

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Beitrag von kleine-liebe

19.11.2006 17:45:06

kleine-liebe

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Themenstarter
kleine-liebe hat das Thema eröffnet...

mag mir keiner helfen???

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Beitrag von schwarzer...

19.11.2006 17:48:37

schwarzer...

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n tipp am rande...die mehrzahl von "hair" gibt es nicht nicht, es bleibt hair...hairs heisst nämlich schamhaar

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Beitrag von BlackSilver

19.11.2006 17:49:47

BlackSilver

BlackSilver hat kein Profilbild...

he ich hab doch shcon was verbessert.. ua hair..

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Beitrag von rotermond

19.11.2006 17:54:50

rotermond

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das mit "hairS" wollt ich auch grad schreiben
toooll

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Beitrag von Live2bHappy

19.11.2006 18:06:38

Live2bHappy

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war ma so nett und habs mal versucht ^^ also dir zu helfen.. hoffe das nützt dir was :
On this page we can see a picture with the headline „young people today”. On the first sight the headline doesn’t fit to the picture, because the picture shows a very old man. He might be 90 years old, or even older.In my opinion the man doesn’t look happy.He makes say impression to me ( weiß nicht ob to me richtig ist). Beside that he doesn’t look very attractiv or handsome but in an other way sympathic.On his face you can see many wrinkles , his brows are very long and his nose is big. The picture is a portrait so we can only see the head of the man and a bit of the upper part of his body. We can see that he wears a shite shirt under a black jacket. When I think about the possible circumstances and the whole situation while this photo was taken I could imagine that according to the headline a young person took this photo of the old man. Perhaps the young person wanted to know how the old man lives and to think about his/her own future. An other idea is that the photo has been taken during a period of time where the man was loney. He is the only person in the picture and looks sad and old. Maybe he just expresses his own feelings or actually he is really old and has no family or his wife is dead. That could be the reason why he wears black clothes.
In regard to our present situation in germany and our birthrate I can assume that the artist of the picture wants to show us ina very sarcastic way that the old people are the “young people today”. In eralier days there were a lot of young , hard-working and passionate people. Today Germany´s birthrate continues to decrease and there are a lot more old people, who live longer.

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Beitrag von Live2bHappy

19.11.2006 18:08:45

Live2bHappy

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* makes a sad impresion ... und *attractive sry ^^

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Beitrag von Live2bHappy

19.11.2006 18:14:08

Live2bHappy

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hey ich helf dir hier und du schreibst nicht mehr?!?! na das nen ich dankbarkeit :P

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Beitrag von kleine-liebe

19.11.2006 18:33:45

kleine-liebe

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Themenstarter
kleine-liebe hat das Thema eröffnet...

@live2behappy
sorry war grad duschen

freu mich sehr dass du mir hilfst, vielen dank!!!

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